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Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Flash Fiction - Unbelievable

This week's 100 word story using the following picture prompt






Unbelievable

The Detective gazed out of the Penthouse Suite, the windows wall to ceiling. 'What a view' he commented. It was a crystal clear day, the water was absurdly still. Serenity reigned supreme.

‘He entered the water there?’ Pointing directly at the centre of the Marina, he quizzed the owner of the property.

She nodded, cigarette in hand, the hand shaking violently.

‘The thing is Marion, the divers have found no evidence of a body, or the boat.’

‘5th call this week, I’ll let myself out.’

‘I know what I saw’ she muttered as she popped open another bottle of red.


Hope you enjoyed it! 
Bettina x

With thanks to the lovely Rochelle who organises this each week. If you wish to read other stories based on this prompt click here 
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11 comments:

  1. Dale29 March 2017 at 14:00

    Oh dear...

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  2. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields29 March 2017 at 14:07

    Dear Bettina,

    I wonder if she drank less wine...?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Magaly Guerrero29 March 2017 at 15:34

    I wonder what the lack of closure will do to her anxiety, smoking, and drinking...

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  4. Mike29 March 2017 at 20:16

    So many possibilities, but my moneys on the red stuff.

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  5. Iain Kelly29 March 2017 at 20:32

    I still believe she saw something, wine or not, there's a murder-mystery here!

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  6. Anonymous30 March 2017 at 19:02

    A very interesting beginning of something that could go many directions. -- gah learner

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  7. brudberg30 March 2017 at 21:05

    Alas, it might be imagination... maybe she should switch to white.

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  8. Alicia1 April 2017 at 21:08

    Oops! Too much stimulation, perhaps.

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  9. Anonymous2 April 2017 at 04:43

    Ahhh, the plot thickens..

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  10. Fatima Fakier Deria2 April 2017 at 12:04

    Sounds like a good start to a thriller? The amnesia girl kind of thriller. Nice take on the prompt.

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  11. Yuhu Tama4 April 2017 at 18:56

    Wow! This story must continue. I'm too curious to know what's happening!

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